A Fourth-Grade Perspective

by mizwrite on February 11, 2009

If sunshine felt like snowflakes,

So yellow and so bright,

We could build a sunman

Or we could have a sunball fight.

– Nate, 4th Grade

My son gave me this poem yesterday and it made me smile. Do you have any fun “kidbits” to share? Don’t they always make you think of the world in a more positive light?

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Chris February 11, 2009 at 9:39 pm

I always love getting things from the kids. Everything they write or draw is always fun, positive and hopeful. Never a negative; I wish that they could stay that way forever.

Debi February 12, 2009 at 2:15 am

That is too cute! I always loved getting cards and pictures from the kids when they were little. They were always so pure and full of love! I like Nates idea, we had snow here two days ago, I’d much rather have a sunball fight!!

Grace February 12, 2009 at 2:45 pm

I think it’s pretty high level for a young age. Looks like you’ve got a writer on your hands…

It’s such a sweet and happy poem. And innocent!

pbdiva February 12, 2009 at 9:40 pm

A nice little writer you have. It creates a happy picture.

mizwrite February 12, 2009 at 11:53 pm

Chris and Debi — Yes, all those sweet things the kids give us are unbelievably cherished, aren’t they? Two of my upcoming posts are about what to do with ALL those cute drawings, stories, poems, fingerpaintings, etc. …

Grace and pbdiva — Thanks for the compliments — I’ll pass ‘em along to Nate. Thanks for stopping by, pbdvia — I like your blog about paperbacks! I’ll have to spend a nice, long time perusing your blog this weekend. …

Judy February 13, 2009 at 7:44 pm

what an original piece from nate!

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